Thank you, as always, for your thorough comments. I was really excited to see your username!
I love that he can't seem to give up control without snatching it back the next moment. Exactly. I'm glad you felt that flowed from the first story. I originally planned to write this from Ohno's point of view, but Nino seems to be having a harder time "dealing," so it just keeps coming from him...
I'm really happy with the details you picked out, because those were the parts of the story that were really clear to me before I started writing.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for reading. I look forward to seeing your feedback again!
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timeasmymeasure
Re: You should know that I'm about a step away from leaving construction paper hearts in your cubby.
Date: 2008-07-12 05:05 pm (UTC)Thank you, as always, for your thorough comments. I was really excited to see your username!
I love that he can't seem to give up control without snatching it back the next moment.
Exactly. I'm glad you felt that flowed from the first story. I originally planned to write this from Ohno's point of view, but Nino seems to be having a harder time "dealing," so it just keeps coming from him...
I'm really happy with the details you picked out, because those were the parts of the story that were really clear to me before I started writing.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for reading. I look forward to seeing your feedback again!