1,924 words. Oh. *reads* Oh damn. OH DAMN. *insert incoherency* YES IT IS VERY ENJOYABLE, THANK YOU VERY MUCH. No, seriously. Lose all respect for you, are you kidding ? This thing is going to get you worshippers. For a first Arashi/Arashi, you did a pretty awesome job. I'd like to quote every passage that I loved more particularly but I'd probably end up quoting the whole fic orz But "fivesome"... Oh Aiba ♥ And “Contrary to popular belief,” Jun breathes, closing his eyes so that he can retain as much composure as possible now that Ohno’s fingers are searching desperately for his prostate. “I don’t bottom.” “Oh, God, I thought you were going to say you weren’t gay,” Sho replies, still chuckling. OI, SHO! xD And Aiba who wants everyone to kiss everyone before, and Sho catching Nino off-guard and “I want to fuck Sho.” Sho’s low laugh seems to send a shiver down everyone’s spine., and Nino knowing how Ohno would be in bed, of course (*Ohmiya fan at heart*) and Jun being awkward and totally in at the same time and Jun and Nino ♥, and I could go on and on and on. The ending is perfect. YES JUN, YOU BELONG, ARASHI LOVES YOU. I love you so much ! I didn't expect half of what you wrote and it's so awesome I'm so glad I requested it because I LOVE IT. And I probably would have loved it even if it wasn't porn, because your characers are great like that (but let's face it, no one says no to porn nowadays and neither do I)
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Re: part three
Date: 2008-10-30 10:46 am (UTC)For a first Arashi/Arashi, you did a pretty awesome job. I'd like to quote every passage that I loved more particularly but I'd probably end up quoting the whole fic orz
But "fivesome"... Oh Aiba ♥
And “Contrary to popular belief,” Jun breathes, closing his eyes so that he can retain as much composure as possible now that Ohno’s fingers are searching desperately for his prostate. “I don’t bottom.”
“Oh, God, I thought you were going to say you weren’t gay,” Sho replies, still chuckling. OI, SHO! xD
And Aiba who wants everyone to kiss everyone before, and Sho catching Nino off-guard and “I want to fuck Sho.” Sho’s low laugh seems to send a shiver down everyone’s spine., and Nino knowing how Ohno would be in bed, of course (*Ohmiya fan at heart*) and Jun being awkward and totally in at the same time and Jun and Nino ♥, and I could go on and on and on.
The ending is perfect. YES JUN, YOU BELONG, ARASHI LOVES YOU.
I love you so much ! I didn't expect half of what you wrote and it's so awesome I'm so glad I requested it because I LOVE IT. And I probably would have loved it even if it wasn't porn, because your characers are great like that (but let's face it, no one says no to porn nowadays and neither do I)
Thank you so much for granting my request m(_ _)m