“Senior Nan, please, I need your guidance! Don’t turn your back on a miserable man!” This was so perfect I nearly squealed out loud when I read it -- all of the dialogue is perfect, I can picture it, well, okay, subtitled under Jiro's dismayed flailing and Danson's raised eyebrows and sighs.
“Why am I the only one you can talk to?” Nan demands, not amused.
“Well, you’re the most experienced person I know,” Xiu-Yi answers, blushing a little.
Nan rolls his eyes.
“A two,” he answers. “Feel better?”
afhadfakjhfdasjdfakjfdhakfdjhakdsjfasfj well played, Xiu-Yi.
Seriously, this was completely perfect. Every bit of it. <3333333333333333!!!! Thank you so much! XD
Re: occupational hazard [2/2]
“Senior Nan, please, I need your guidance! Don’t turn your back on a miserable man!” This was so perfect I nearly squealed out loud when I read it -- all of the dialogue is perfect, I can picture it, well, okay, subtitled under Jiro's dismayed flailing and Danson's raised eyebrows and sighs.
“Why am I the only one you can talk to?” Nan demands, not amused.
“Well, you’re the most experienced person I know,” Xiu-Yi answers, blushing a little.
Nan rolls his eyes.
“A two,” he answers. “Feel better?”
afhadfakjhfdasjdfakjfdhakfdjhakdsjfasfj well played, Xiu-Yi.
Seriously, this was completely perfect. Every bit of it. <3333333333333333!!!! Thank you so much! XD