First of all, I love this. I love this so much. When I saw an update from you I got so excited - there are a bunch of things I have to do by the end of the night and I just put everything on hold, I turned off my music, and I just sat here and read your fic, because I am that in love with your writing. There are certain lines of this that I actually had to pause and digest before I could move on, because they were so amazing. Lines like:
In the back of his head, Jun hears Sho’s laugh. and He wonders how long they can pretend. and They should have known, really, by how different he was with Ohno.
Maybe I should copy+paste every single line because they're all brilliant.
Sho was so heartbreaking - how he's different from the rest of them and he doesn't know why - and then he calls his friend over and he doesn't know what he's trying to prove and GAH JUST -- fdalfaewjcdsa I can't even be coherent right now because I am a mess of confusing emotions inside and I can't put words to it. I don't know how I feel about this. It's so sad and them breaking apart like this tears me to shreds but then Nino loves Ohno and Ohno loves that, and Aiba and Jun are trying so hard, and Sho was actually paying attention to the damn movie omfggggggggg. I like to think that this is a happy ending, at least for Aiba and Jun, but I can't even call it that, it's more just like an ending where there are bad things, but some good things as well.
;__________;
I'm sorry, this must be the most retarded comment ever. Please just know that I love your writing and I thought this was amazing. So amazing.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2009-05-13 02:44 am (UTC)I --
First of all, I love this. I love this so much. When I saw an update from you I got so excited - there are a bunch of things I have to do by the end of the night and I just put everything on hold, I turned off my music, and I just sat here and read your fic, because I am that in love with your writing. There are certain lines of this that I actually had to pause and digest before I could move on, because they were so amazing. Lines like:
In the back of his head, Jun hears Sho’s laugh.
and
He wonders how long they can pretend.
and
They should have known, really, by how different he was with Ohno.
Maybe I should copy+paste every single line because they're all brilliant.
Sho was so heartbreaking - how he's different from the rest of them and he doesn't know why - and then he calls his friend over and he doesn't know what he's trying to prove and GAH JUST -- fdalfaewjcdsa I can't even be coherent right now because I am a mess of confusing emotions inside and I can't put words to it. I don't know how I feel about this. It's so sad and them breaking apart like this tears me to shreds but then Nino loves Ohno and Ohno loves that, and Aiba and Jun are trying so hard, and Sho was actually paying attention to the damn movie omfggggggggg. I like to think that this is a happy ending, at least for Aiba and Jun, but I can't even call it that, it's more just like an ending where there are bad things, but some good things as well.
;__________;
I'm sorry, this must be the most retarded comment ever. Please just know that I love your writing and I thought this was amazing. So amazing.