Oh lord, I'm not sure there is much to say, this is simply lovely ♥
The characterizations are spot on and it's amazing how much you can tell in just one sentence. And being a huge Aiba/Jun fan, I really just loved how you've portrayed them, the dynamics of their relationship, the push and pull, it's beautiful. And I've never really thought about how Arashi would work if they ever, well if this ever happened and I can only imagine how painful it for you to write. But the end result is really beautiful in itself.
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Date: 2009-05-13 06:39 am (UTC)The characterizations are spot on and it's amazing how much you can tell in just one sentence. And being a huge Aiba/Jun fan, I really just loved how you've portrayed them, the dynamics of their relationship, the push and pull, it's beautiful. And I've never really thought about how Arashi would work if they ever, well if this ever happened and I can only imagine how painful it for you to write. But the end result is really beautiful in itself.
So amazing really ♥