ext_168258 ([identity profile] katzichan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cupcake4mafia 2009-05-14 07:19 am (UTC)

this was beautifuuuullllll. and so real. and so beautiful.
i love the jun & aiba bond. nino in love was so cute.
i love how with jun and aiba, you really can sense their similarities here. like, there's a love between them, but it's also a sort of... mutual understanding.
shoooooooooo. sad. ;-; he wants what doesn't "suit him" at all.

i loved how believable this all was. and your prose is SHARP, yesss. clear and sharp and insightful. but really, fivesome fics - love them though i do - usually paint a completely unbelievable image of five sex gods completely and selflessly enamored with each other for ever and ever the end... i will probably hold onto the "arashi is really a giant happy fivesome" conspiracy theory until i die, but there's no way it could really be that simple... just because it's a slashfic dream, it could not possibly happen without the tiniest bit of awkward. and i think you did an amazing job of picking up on that here.

anyway. amazing~~~ really excellent ^w^

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