ps, i reread and wanted to add:
aiba & jun crying = awwwwhahaha.
ohno not knowing how to react to nino loving him = awwwwww.
the moment when jun heard sho laugh in the back of his head explained to me what kinds of concerns were going through his head really, really clearly. that was a sharp insight.
and when sho asked if the door was still open, that was really poignant.

you really have a shrewd eye for details and use them well to make things really, really come to life. :) not a word is wasted.