Although it (really really) hurts on Sho's part, I'm happy that it you didn't make it a complete happy ending. I love happy fun times fivesome fics, but this - you just wrote it so well. I love how it doesn't work out for all of them, because in real life nothing works too well for so long, because things like that are too good to be true.
This was so heartbreaking to read and so wonderfully written ;_____; ♥
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Date: 2009-05-14 11:53 am (UTC)Although it (really really) hurts on Sho's part, I'm happy that it you didn't make it a complete happy ending. I love happy fun times fivesome fics, but this - you just wrote it so well. I love how it doesn't work out for all of them, because in real life nothing works too well for so long, because things like that are too good to be true.
This was so heartbreaking to read and so wonderfully written ;_____; ♥