The dialogue really is sharp, and nothing in this fic was weighed down at all, if that makes sense. It's really cleanly written. You don't get stuck with too much detail (like I do) but there's quirky things that keep you engaged.
I mean, I really love it, dude. I've already pimped it out. *g* Totally saving the link; thank you for writing it, and I really hope to see you write more. ♥
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Date: 2008-03-05 08:02 am (UTC)The dialogue really is sharp, and nothing in this fic was weighed down at all, if that makes sense. It's really cleanly written. You don't get stuck with too much detail (like I do) but there's quirky things that keep you engaged.
I mean, I really love it, dude. I've already pimped it out. *g* Totally saving the link; thank you for writing it, and I really hope to see you write more. ♥