Nice work! “I think that’s the most I’ve ever heard you say in one sitting" Yeah! great sentence,lol
“I’m not saying I love you,” Tatsuya grunts. “But I do like you, and I don’t mind sleeping with you.”---> he deserves punishment, lol “Don’t mind?” “Don’t mind is a lot for me! Sex with guys is my job, it doesn’t come into my personal life, ever.”---> but good and logic answer.
I enjoyed it a lot, I wish you have the time and determination to do more fics, I'll read them with pleasure. This if my fav couple, have you seen the gift disc of koi ni ochitara?, How I wished in the karaoke scene after that sweet kiss that Tatsuya looking at the camera had said: Ok guys, out of the room now!, lol, so rude, thats not the shy Tatsuya... that's the reason I dont write fics,lol.
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Date: 2009-09-26 03:48 am (UTC)“I think that’s the most I’ve ever heard you say in one sitting" Yeah! great sentence,lol
“I’m not saying I love you,” Tatsuya grunts. “But I do like you, and I don’t mind sleeping with you.”---> he deserves punishment, lol
“Don’t mind?”
“Don’t mind is a lot for me! Sex with guys is my job, it doesn’t come into my personal life, ever.”---> but good and logic answer.
I enjoyed it a lot, I wish you have the time and determination to do more fics, I'll read them with pleasure.
This if my fav couple, have you seen the gift disc of koi ni ochitara?, How I wished in the karaoke scene after that sweet kiss that Tatsuya looking at the camera had said: Ok guys, out of the room now!, lol, so rude, thats not the shy Tatsuya... that's the reason I dont write fics,lol.