http://314159.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] 314159.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cupcake4mafia 2009-10-27 08:12 pm (UTC)

...................... DFLSKDSJDLKSDJLSK I CAN'T EVEN PUT MY LOVE FOR THIS INTO WORDS

this was AMAZING. just PERFECT. you did everything I could ever ask someone to do in a G-Ri fic

- you characterized Seungri in a believable way as opposed to making him shriek OMG HYUNG I'M SO SCANDALIZED AND YOUNG~~~~
- you wrote Jiyong well too -- he isn't hiding behind his stage persona in this fic, he's just... himself
- YOU STUCK IN GAHO!!!! and Boss. omg.
- YOU MENTIONED SEUNGRI BEING THE OLD PUPPY flkdjsd you have no idea how happy it makes me when people compare Seungri to a puppy. THEY ARE ONE AND THE SAME
- you wrote G-Ri's relationship so..... realistically, which is weird to say since hell if I know what their relationship is actually like, but idk. I'd imagine it to be more like this and less like TOM AND JERRY LOL 24/7!!!

kdlsjfdf I loved this SO MUCH and am definitely memming it and reading it like.... a hundred times more. I have never been this happy with a G-Ri fic in my life ;___; it was really lovely. it had the right amount of humor and sexual tension and fluff and cuteness and it was Seungri-centric and just UGH PERFECT IT WAS SO PERFECT.

ilu <333333

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